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Normandy114

Age/Gender: 15, Male
Location: Devon, UK
Job: None, I'm lazy

Phew, Well I'm jake and soon you can see my new series of animated shorts, FF. Lost Travellers (first one out now). Im working on a second one and im taking into account almost all reviews

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1/28/07

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Exp. Points: 410 / 550
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Voting Pow.: 4.84 votes

BBS Posts: 47 (0.04 per day)
Flash Reviews: 15
Music Reviews: 2
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Latest Flash Reviews

15 Reviews | 4 w/ Responses

Score: 2
OMF: 2097 (demo)

"Crap"

submission: OMF: 2097 (demo)
date: June 5, 2007

Seriously, how this made it past blam i don't know, but all it is is 6 different buttons in total and some decent music and ripped sprites. This only got a decent score as everyone knows you from the numa numa dance...
...make this game finished for god sake.

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Score: 4
Nickelbackdo this anymore

"Could be improved"

date: June 4, 2007

Graphics: Need work, if you plan on making things like this in the future, a graphic tablet may be a good idea, but at your age it may be out of your spending limits. Try spending longer on your graphics, as they are certainly not something to have ruined.

Style: Too choppy and lacking a high FPS, i'm guessing this was animated at 12 fps. Increse the FPS to something in the 22-28 range, as thats far smoother. Also, the fact most of this was made with shape tweens lowered the style.

Sound: Good song, disliked the fact the song cut halfway through though.

Violence: None

Interactivity: A button, good enough for a 1

Humour: The cruddy car was a little laughable.

Overall: Needs Improvement and also needs to be finished before it's submitted to the flash portal, previews go in Newgrounds Alpha.

Author's Response:

thanks for the review =)
yeah next time something like this comes up i will definitely use 24 fps and i'm pretty broke atm so i can't affored a drawing tablet but i think i'll practice on my drawing skills.
and thanks for telling me about the Newgrounds Alpha, i didn't know about it =)

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Score: 10
3D Animation

"I'm speechless"

submission: 3D Animation
date: May 27, 2007

This is an incredible submission, i can't believe that took you 2.5 hours per second, it really shows how much work some people are willing to put into their submission. I can easily see this going into the 4/5 range, if not 4.5/5.
If you could, make it into a game, i'm sure it would be incredible.

Author's Response:

I wish i could make it into a game to! :P
Alot of programming envolved... maybe in a couple of years time.

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Latest Audio Reviews

2 Reviews | 0 w/ Responses

Score: 10
Rtght Ore Lwft--_--

"Very good piece"

date: February 21, 2007

Awesome piece of music. I think i'll either use thi or bunny ripper in my new submission, so expect a bit of credit coming your way. The techno beats enhance the song imenssly. Keep up the V. good work!

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Score: 10
Bunny Ripper--_--GOA TRANCE

"I hate/love that cat"

date: February 21, 2007

I'm not sure, love the cat because you made this based on it, or hate it for killing the rabbit. I'm not sure, but in the mean time i think it's an awesome piece, keep it up!

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