Age/Gender: 15, Male
Location: Devon, UK
Job: None, I'm lazy
Phew, Well I'm jake and soon you can see my new series of animated shorts, FF. Lost Travellers (first one out now). Im working on a second one and im taking into account almost all reviews
Newgrounds Stats
Whistle Status: Normal
Exp. Points: 410 / 550
Exp. Rank #: 95,217
Voting Pow.: 4.84 votes
BBS Posts: 47 (0.04 per day)
Flash Reviews: 15
Music Reviews: 2
Trophies: 0
Stickers: 0
Latest Flash Reviews
Seriously, how this made it past blam i don't know, but all it is is 6 different buttons in total and some decent music and ripped sprites. This only got a decent score as everyone knows you from the numa numa dance...
...make this game finished for god sake.
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Graphics: Need work, if you plan on making things like this in the future, a graphic tablet may be a good idea, but at your age it may be out of your spending limits. Try spending longer on your graphics, as they are certainly not something to have ruined.
Style: Too choppy and lacking a high FPS, i'm guessing this was animated at 12 fps. Increse the FPS to something in the 22-28 range, as thats far smoother. Also, the fact most of this was made with shape tweens lowered the style.
Sound: Good song, disliked the fact the song cut halfway through though.
Violence: None
Interactivity: A button, good enough for a 1
Humour: The cruddy car was a little laughable.
Overall: Needs Improvement and also needs to be finished before it's submitted to the flash portal, previews go in Newgrounds Alpha.
Author's Response:
thanks for the review =)
yeah next time something like this comes up i will definitely use 24 fps and i'm pretty broke atm so i can't affored a drawing tablet but i think i'll practice on my drawing skills.
and thanks for telling me about the Newgrounds Alpha, i didn't know about it =)
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This is an incredible submission, i can't believe that took you 2.5 hours per second, it really shows how much work some people are willing to put into their submission. I can easily see this going into the 4/5 range, if not 4.5/5.
If you could, make it into a game, i'm sure it would be incredible.
Author's Response:
I wish i could make it into a game to! :P
Alot of programming envolved... maybe in a couple of years time.
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Latest Audio Reviews
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Awesome piece of music. I think i'll either use thi or bunny ripper in my new submission, so expect a bit of credit coming your way. The techno beats enhance the song imenssly. Keep up the V. good work!
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I'm not sure, love the cat because you made this based on it, or hate it for killing the rabbit. I'm not sure, but in the mean time i think it's an awesome piece, keep it up!
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