Normandy114

Age/Gender: 15, Male
Location: Devon, UK
Job: None, I'm lazy

Phew, Well I'm jake and soon you can see my new series of animated shorts, FF. Lost Travellers (first one out now). Im working on a second one and im taking into account almost all reviews

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Flash Reviews: 15
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Score: 2
OMF: 2097 (demo)

"Crap"

submission: OMF: 2097 (demo)
date: June 5, 2007

Seriously, how this made it past blam i don't know, but all it is is 6 different buttons in total and some decent music and ripped sprites. This only got a decent score as everyone knows you from the numa numa dance...
...make this game finished for god sake.

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Score: 4
Nickelbackdo this anymore

"Could be improved"

date: June 4, 2007

Graphics: Need work, if you plan on making things like this in the future, a graphic tablet may be a good idea, but at your age it may be out of your spending limits. Try spending longer on your graphics, as they are certainly not something to have ruined.

Style: Too choppy and lacking a high FPS, i'm guessing this was animated at 12 fps. Increse the FPS to something in the 22-28 range, as thats far smoother. Also, the fact most of this was made with shape tweens lowered the style.

Sound: Good song, disliked the fact the song cut halfway through though.

Violence: None

Interactivity: A button, good enough for a 1

Humour: The cruddy car was a little laughable.

Overall: Needs Improvement and also needs to be finished before it's submitted to the flash portal, previews go in Newgrounds Alpha.

Author's Response:

thanks for the review =)
yeah next time something like this comes up i will definitely use 24 fps and i'm pretty broke atm so i can't affored a drawing tablet but i think i'll practice on my drawing skills.
and thanks for telling me about the Newgrounds Alpha, i didn't know about it =)

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Score: 10
3D Animation

"I'm speechless"

submission: 3D Animation
date: May 27, 2007

This is an incredible submission, i can't believe that took you 2.5 hours per second, it really shows how much work some people are willing to put into their submission. I can easily see this going into the 4/5 range, if not 4.5/5.
If you could, make it into a game, i'm sure it would be incredible.

Author's Response:

I wish i could make it into a game to! :P
Alot of programming envolved... maybe in a couple of years time.

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Score: 6
Duck.fla Spin

"Hilarious"

submission: Duck.fla Spin
date: May 21, 2007

Hehe, absolutly hilarious, that tv show was pure randomness.

Author's Response:

YA, WTF BEARS CAN'T FLY!

AND WHAT'S THE DEAL WITH AIRLINE FOOD?

Thank you, I'll be here all week.

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Score: 2
Shining Force 2 : pilot

"An embarrasment to Shining force kind"

date: May 14, 2007

Please, never release anything like this on the world EVER again.

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Score: 7
Sprite Survivor - 1

"BAT BIRDS!"

date: May 14, 2007

Legendary series, but if you ever do bats again, remove the beaks, then they'll look less like pigeons :p

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Score: 9
Detonate

"VERY nice!"

submission: Detonate
date: February 20, 2007

I lvoed this game. The sound was very effective and went well with the game. The graphics were nice and the explosions brought a nice sense of violent blood lust =D. Good style, and very addicting. Keep up the good work.

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Score: 1
Flying Shit: Part I

"Very bad"

date: February 20, 2007

I hated this submission. The sick nature of having a dead old man's balls showing and making a joke out of it is pretty bad, but showing a guys penis shrivilling up - thats just bad. On top of that the ratings are wrong, it should be Extreme Nudity; Extreme Explicit Audio/Text; Mild Violence. If you want to improve, adjust the souind times to be right, get rid of the sick jokes, get rid of some foul language and PUT THE WARNINGS RIGHT!

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Score: 10
littleFoot

"Awesome"

submission: littleFoot
date: February 20, 2007

Without a doubt, best flash on the face of the earth. I loved it, bitey is a very unique character which is very good as if i see yet another Disney "I'm sad and i have a big mission to go on, i need a friend" blah blah blah thing i'll explode.
On a diff. subject, still very good

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Score: 9
NGAP Radio

"Great stuff"

submission: NGAP Radio
date: February 6, 2007

Heya, this is really good stuff, i liked it very much. Btw i was one of the people that gave this a 5 getting it past judgment. I never guessed it'd be on front page. Kudos

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